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A rough draft is a preliminary or tentative revision. It is where the writer gets his/her thoughts on paper. After the rough draft is created, it will be edited. Editing is the step where a writer refines the copy. Proof readers’ marks are used to edit the rough draft. The editing changes will then be made to the original. After the changes have been made, read the copy again. More changes may still need to be made to the copy. Editing and proof reading do take time and effort. An error -free message is worth the trouble, however.
When a positive image of the person who wrote the message is formed, the message is more likely to succeed. Remember, you never get a second chance to make a good first impression.
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Plains Indians
The America Plains Indians are among the best known of all Native Americans. The Indians play a significant role in shaping the history of the West. Some of the more noteworthy Plains Indians were Big Foot, Black kettle, Crazy Horse, Red Cloud, Sitting Bull, and Spotted Tail.
Big Foot
Big Foot (?1825-1890) was also known as Spotted Elk. Born in the northern Great Plains, he eventually became a Minneconjou Teton Sioux chief. He was part of a tribal delegation that traveled to Washington, D.C., and worked to establish schools throughout the Sioux Territory. He was one of those massacred at Wounded Knee in December 1864 (Bowman, 1995 ,63)
Black Kettle
Black Kettle (?1803-1868) was born near the Black Hills in present-day South Dakota. He was recognized as a Southern Cheyenne peace chief for his effort to bring peace to the region. However, his attempts at accommodation were not successful and his band was massacred at Sand Creek in 1864. Even though he continued to seek peace, he was killed wit the remainder of his tribe in the Washita Valley of Oklahoma in 1868 (Bowman, 1995, 67)
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Crazy Horse
Crazy Horse (?1803-1877) was also born near the Black Hills. His father was a medicine man; his mother was the sister of Spotted Tail. He was recognized as a skilled hunter and fighter. Crazy Horse believed he was immune from battle injury and took part in all the major Sioux battle to protect the Black Hills. He was named supreme war and peace chief of the Oglalas in 1876 and led the Sioux and Cheyenne to victory
A rough draft is a preliminary or tentative revision. It is where the writer gets his/her thoughts on paper. After the rough draft is created, it will be edited. Editing is the step where a writer refines the copy. Proof readers’ marks are used to edit the rough draft. The editing changes will then be made to the original. After the changes have been made, read the copy again. More changes may still need to be made to the copy. Editing and proof reading do take time and effort. An error -free message is worth the trouble, however.
When a positive image of the person who wrote the message is formed, the message is more likely to succeed. Remember, you never get a second chance to make a good first impression.
Pg.156
Plains Indians
The America Plains Indians are among the best known of all Native Americans. The Indians play a significant role in shaping the history of the West. Some of the more noteworthy Plains Indians were Big Foot, Black kettle, Crazy Horse, Red Cloud, Sitting Bull, and Spotted Tail.
Big Foot
Big Foot (?1825-1890) was also known as Spotted Elk. Born in the northern Great Plains, he eventually became a Minneconjou Teton Sioux chief. He was part of a tribal delegation that traveled to Washington, D.C., and worked to establish schools throughout the Sioux Territory. He was one of those massacred at Wounded Knee in December 1864 (Bowman, 1995 ,63)
Black Kettle
Black Kettle (?1803-1868) was born near the Black Hills in present-day South Dakota. He was recognized as a Southern Cheyenne peace chief for his effort to bring peace to the region. However, his attempts at accommodation were not successful and his band was massacred at Sand Creek in 1864. Even though he continued to seek peace, he was killed wit the remainder of his tribe in the Washita Valley of Oklahoma in 1868 (Bowman, 1995, 67)
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Crazy Horse
Crazy Horse (?1803-1877) was also born near the Black Hills. His father was a medicine man; his mother was the sister of Spotted Tail. He was recognized as a skilled hunter and fighter. Crazy Horse believed he was immune from battle injury and took part in all the major Sioux battle to protect the Black Hills. He was named supreme war and peace chief of the Oglalas in 1876 and led the Sioux and Cheyenne to victory